X-Git-Url: http://www.privoxy.org/gitweb/?a=blobdiff_plain;f=doc%2Fsource%2Fhistory.sgml;h=f1a22ed044979ad5025c05d0535fa5ba0ca758bd;hb=71e1ccf869288acf3d482f1931ea747aaea3f255;hp=2621f36cf738982c92e180ba5888e00b6e8996ef;hpb=1384db7d3e57bd489472bbc189ecb0749d6811e9;p=privoxy.git

diff --git a/doc/source/history.sgml b/doc/source/history.sgml
index 2621f36c..f1a22ed0 100644
--- a/doc/source/history.sgml
+++ b/doc/source/history.sgml
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 
  Purpose     :  Entity included in other project documents.
                 
- $Id: history.sgml,v 2.2 2002/07/30 21:54:50 hal9 Exp $
+ $Id: history.sgml,v 2.5 2006/09/22 01:27:55 hal9 Exp $
 
-  Copyright (C) 2001, 2002 Privoxy Developers <developers@privoxy.org>
+  Copyright (C) 2001-2006 Privoxy Developers http://privoxy.org
   See LICENSE.
 
  ======================================================================
@@ -25,17 +25,17 @@
 -->
 
 <para>
- In the beginning, there was the
+ A long time ago, there was the
  <ulink url="http://www.junkbusters.com/ijb.html"><application>Internet Junkbuster</application></ulink>, 
  by Anonymous Coders and <ulink url="http://www.junkbusters.com/">Junkbusters
- Corporation</ulink>. It saved many users a lot of pain in the early days of
+ Corporation</ulink>. This saved many users a lot of pain in the early days of
  web advertising and user tracking.
 </para>
 
 <para>
  But the web, its protocols and standards, and with it, the techniques for
- forcing  users to consume ads, give up autonomy over their browsing, and
- for spying on them, kept evolving. Unfortunately, the <application>Internet
+ forcing  ads on users, give up autonomy over their browsing, and
+ for tracking them, keeps evolving. Unfortunately, the <application>Internet
  Junkbuster</application> did not. Version 2.0.2, published in 1998, was 
  (and is) the last official
  <ulink url="http://www.junkbusters.com/ijbdist.html#release">release</ulink>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
 
 <para>
  The result of this is <application>Privoxy</application>, whose first
- stable release, 3.0, was released August, 2002. 
+ stable version, 3.0, was released August, 2002. 
  <!-- Cautious!!!!!!!!! ;) -->
 </para>